My main take aways from these peer review comments included the need for clarifying Jonathan's role in the film opening and making the journal more visible to the viewers. Since we are unable to rerecord at school, my group and I will have to come up with a new plot that makes Jonathan's role more clear. One idea we came up with is having him wake up from a dream, the dream being Abbie chasing me in the woods. This can be done from his house and will eliminate confusion.
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